he table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

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two pie charts illustrate how many

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of

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and

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employed

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for a

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in 1992.

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there were 31% of

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also

6% of male

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. Female workers had risen

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25 per cent compared to

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by that time. Respectively there were

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37% clerical

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employees

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.

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general labourers for

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1%

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shows us that for

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this

work is taking the lowest

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workersget

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workers get

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percentage of

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2%

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. It shows the curiosity from

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side. So

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male

percent

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who are applied for general labourers are 2% respectively

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3%

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who work for general labourers.

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applied for

crafts

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had risen

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21% because

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is

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3%. When male’s applied for 24%. It shows us that

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for

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crafts

usually

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got

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high attention. So respectively

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who applied for

crafts

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jobs

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27

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%.

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clear that 3 jobs like other manual, managerial

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and

crafts

are

on

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the top of the attention for female workers compared to men.