The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the
debates
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about finding out and replacing other fuels
instead
of fossil
fuel
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is a hot trend.
Altough
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there are many other problems that need to be solved around the world, in my
opinion
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this
replacement should be the priority of the governments.
Firstly
,there
have
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been
rapid
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increase in the usage of fossil
fuel
therefore
,we might face the challenge of running out
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kind of
fuel
in the near future.
This
valuable
fuel
contribute
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significantly to our everyday life
such
as manufacturing power and gas,powering different tools that we use daily for our chores.The lack of fossil
fuel
have
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a destructive impact on people's
life
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that can lead to
exsinct
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extinction
of
human
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eventually.
Moreover
finding the new alternative can be time-consuming which is another reason why it should be
prioritiz
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prioritized
prioritize
.Governments and
scientist
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should explore quickly and carefully
throughout
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different alternatives to choose the best
option
to replace
it
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before consuming all
of
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the fossil
fuel
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fuels
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.
Secondly
,searching for new
alternative
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alternatives
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could be as
comlicated
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complicated
as solving
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complex mystery.There are lots of
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to consider before introducing the new
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for public use,
for
instance
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the expenses that it might cause,the rate of
hazardouness
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hazardous
hazardousness
of
this
new
option
and whether it would be available for all the nations.Solar energy was the recent choice for replacing
the
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fossil
fuel
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fuels
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but not all
the
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countries have the money and tools to use them. In conclusion,
although
some people might believe that there are more important problems like poverty,
femine
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famine
feminine
and natural accidents that have to be handled, in my opinion searching for
new
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option
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options
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to replace
the
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fossil
fuel
is more
cruical
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crucial
critical
to
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care of,
otherwise
next generation might face the deathly problems in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • climate change
  • sustainability
  • pollution
  • energy security
  • job creation
  • technological innovation
  • energy independence
  • price stability
  • environmental degradation
  • resource sustainability
  • international collaboration
  • global priority
  • energy transition
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