The parents of your Australlan friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for himlher. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter • say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party •explain why you won't be able to attend the party •give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time.

#parents #australlan #friend #chris #surprise #birthday #party #himlher #•explain #•give #plan #time

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letter to inform you regarding about

chris

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birthday party. First of all, he was so

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year

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birthday

pary

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party

because he is going to turn 25 years old. Unfortunately, I

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able

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to come and attend the party

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date

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conflict with my exam schedule. Once

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completed

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my exam,

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will come to the place for the summer break and spend

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vast amount of time with you guys. I hope

chris

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also

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planning

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take

vacation

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work. After two months,

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will come over and we can go for

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. Missing you guys, see you soon. Lovely. Dhivya Ravi

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logical structure

Enhance the logical flow of ideas by organizing similar thoughts together and using more transition words.

single idea per paragraph

Consider breaking the text into distinct paragraphs, ensuring each paragraph conveys a single key idea clearly.

suitable writing tone

Warm and friendly tone appropriate for a letter to a friend's parents.

complete response

Includes all necessary points: why Chris will enjoy the party, reason for absence, and future plans.

greeting and closing

A pleasant opening and closing that appropriately addresses the audience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

121 words

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