In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driver less. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be. Passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As technology
revulontionalised
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revolutionalised
the globe, the world nowadays is deeply immersed in Information Computer Technology (
ICT
) and Artificial
Intellegence
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intelligence
(AI). Many daily human habits
is
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handed over to be done
buy
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by
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ICT
or AI.
Diverless
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Driverless
cars
travelling on the street is one of the examples. It is no doubt that
this
phenomenon is a good sign of human development. Whenever we talk about AI or
ICT
, what springs
in
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to
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mind must be "convenience".
Driverless
cars
shares
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the same advantage. They are controlled by AI
automaticaly
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automatically
such
that there
is
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are
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no
human-drivers
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human drivers
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but only passengers. People can freely travel in
cars
even after
drunk
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being drunk
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, or sleep to take a rest when commuting to
workplace
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the workplace
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or
schools
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school
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.
Driverless
cars
no
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doubts
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soothen
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soothes
soothe
soothed
people's dilemma. Apart from convenience,
driverless
cars
also
boost road safety. Imagine a bus driver
has
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been on duty for 8 hours and still
have
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4 hours to finish his daily 12 hour-routine. After sitting for a long 8 hours, he must be
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and lost focus. It is easy to have accidents when the driver's mental condition is not concentrated.
Nonetheless
, computers would never be tired. With the aid of AI,
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occurence
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occurrence
of accidents of
driverless
cars
can be lowered.
Pasengers'
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Passengers
Passenger
safety is benefited, road
choas
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chaos
is ameliorated.
Thus
, utilising
ICT
and AI for
driverless
cars
surely
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rise to a safety community. As perfect as
driverless
cars
may seem, we cannot turn a blind eye to
its
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flaws. How intelligent
driverless
cars
are, they are still computers. There may
technical
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be technical
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errors some days. Being hacked, or delayed message delivery are the hidden threats. Driving
rely
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relies
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on the instant reaction. If the computer of
driverless
cars
errors,
this
still
give
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rise to car accidents. On top of that, computer literacy may be violated. As
driverless
cars
used
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big data to search for routes to a
spcific
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specific
destination, meaning that the everyday routine of the driver is exposed to
internet
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. He may be tracked, all
the
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personal privacy is exposed.
Thereafter
, the
driverless
cars
cannot keep the privacy intact. Needless to say, the ups of
driverless
cars
outweigh its downs. It is inevitable that computers still have
its shortcoming
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their shortcomings
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.
Therefore
,
human's
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monitor still plays a crucial role in
driverless
cars
. Regular checking or upgrading can slime down the technical complications. AI is a tool. We should utilise most of its advantages in order to assist us in
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lives,
instead
of
rely
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on it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Driverless technology
  • Traffic efficiency
  • Cybersecurity
  • Data privacy
  • Infrastructure
  • Economic impacts
  • Accessibility
  • Social inclusion
  • Emissions
  • Fuel consumption
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Human error
  • Congestion
  • Independence
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