Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?
It is well known that there is a lot of dangerous information on websites;
therefore
, some people believe that local forces should outlaw harmful Linking Words
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on the Internet because it damages people's freedom and parents need to Use synonyms
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Firstly
, citizens nowadays have a right to post any data, unless it breaks laws. Linking Words
Moreover
, it is almost impossible to distinguish between minors and residents who are above 18. Linking Words
In other words
, censoring webs does not only protect children but Linking Words
also
has a significant impact on adults. Linking Words
For example
, reducing the number of webs harms the quality of scientific experiments.
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Secondly
, parents and guardians have many ways to stop Linking Words
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, they can download apps that Linking Words
control
the usage of apps, so they are able to block dangerous websites. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they should explain to their offspring that the Internet has hazardous information. Linking Words
Finally
, if parents are not sure about children's safety, they should not introduce gadgets to Linking Words
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Admittedly, local forces must better Use synonyms
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banned Use synonyms
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as terrorists. Frankly, there are countries that still don't have cyber police, whose goals are to capture hackers.
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To conclude
, governments must not censor any Linking Words
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that is
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, guardians need to Linking Words
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children because they ought to pick by themselves what is safe.Use synonyms
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