Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

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The given map illustrates Garlsdon city, occupied by 65000 inhabitants, where a new supermarket is about to be built.

Therefore

, there has been a heated debate about whether it should be located in the town heart or in the countryside.

Overall

, the town is crossed by a railway that passes near the two locations proposed for the supermarket and it is divided into three areas.

Firstly

, there is the no traffic zone in the middle, where the first suggested location for the market is.

Secondly

, there is a larger area that surrounds the core area, which is divided into three secondary sectors, two small ones are deputed to housing and the third is where the industries take place.

Lastly

, there is the countryside, here, specifically in the top left corner, there is the second location for the mall. In conclusion, the metropolis is located 25km from Cransdon, 16km away from Bransdon, respectively south-east and south-west from Garlsdon.

However

, going north-west for 12km there is Hindon, another city with a population of 10000. All these cities are connected with a system of main roads.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

183 words

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Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, • Tell him/ her about your flat. • Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or a negative development? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience