The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave "very good" rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting, the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave "very good" rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting, the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table depicts the share of
first year
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students that gave great
rating
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ratings
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to the resources supplied by the institution, for 3 programs.
Overall
, Commerce had no proportions less than 80% and dominated over the rest,
while
Law demonstrated ratios over 60% to 80% in every section.
To begin
with, Commerce reached a peak at 95 per cent on information before the course and teaching area.
However
, Law levelled off at more than 60 with 10 % differences
72
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between 72
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% and 62% respectively. On other
sources
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Law got peaked at 80% which was the highest of it and just 1 per cent below Commerce. Unlikely, economics had the same level
with
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Marketing on teaching,
in addition
to
this
, ranked second highest percentage 5% less than it accounting to 90%. But, it experienced the lowest share
on
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Pre-course information which was the least amount in the table standing at 59%.
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