The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. You should write at least 150 words.
The maps
gives
information on Change the verb form
give
the
how Correct article usage
apply
school
changed from 1985 to nowadays.
It is clearly seen that there was considerable development of the school growth in population. Nowadays have developed Fix the agreement mistake
schools
school
for students.
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
According to
the Linking Words
map
there were changes in some objects Add a comma
map,
as
Correct quantifier usage
such as
Correct article usage
the rood
rood
, library, playing fields and classrooms. New blocks are added Correct your spelling
road
such
as Linking Words
sport
Change the noun form
sports
block
and information Use synonyms
block
. There are pool, fitness centre in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the sport
sport
Change the noun form
sports
block
learning Use synonyms
recourse
centre and computer room in Correct your spelling
resource
information
Correct article usage
the information
block
. Use synonyms
Also
new classroom was
constructed above playing fields. Now there are three classrooms Linking Words
instead
of two.
Getting back to details there was road access to playing fields and Linking Words
small
car park next to the library in
1995, Correct article usage
a small
however
small car Linking Words
park
and road access disappeared now. In spite of the significant Fix the agreement mistake
parks
changes
there was an object that has remained in the same place, near the car parking, and it is an office.Add a comma
changes,
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words block with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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