The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts illustrate the percentages of
people
who have
coffee
and
tea
drinking habits divided by what type of
coffee
or
tea
they bought in the
last
four weeks (fresh,
instant
, or directly bought in a café) in five cities (
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisban,
Adelaide
,
Hobart
) in Australia.
Overall
,
people
who directly took
coffee
or
tea
in a café had the majority among bought fresh and
instant
coffee
.
Conversely
,
people
who bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
four weeks had the lowest percentages. In terms of drinking habits in five cities,
people
in
Hobart
had the highest rate of drinking habits.
Adelaide
had the fewest communities
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
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were
favored
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favoured
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in drinking
coffee
or
tea
.
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, and
Hobart
had around 60% of
people
who directly bought
coffee
in the
last
four weeks,
while
only approximately 40% of
Adelaide
’s
people
who had a
favor
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favour
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went to
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the cafe
a cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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.
Moreover
, 50% of Brisban's population had
this
habit, which is a bit higher than
Adelaide
's. Turn to purchased
instant
coffee
in the
last
month, Brisban,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
had around 50%, respectively.
Conversely
,
Sydney
and
Melbourne
had around 40% of the population who
favored
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favoured
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instant
coffee
.
On the other hand
, there were around 30% of Brisban’s and
Adelaide
’s
people
respectively had drinking fresh
coffee
/
tea
as their habit.
While
around 40% of
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, and
Hobart
people
had sipped fresh
coffee
as a habit.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "conversely, last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, tea, instant, sydney, melbourne, adelaide, hobart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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