School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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children

are relying on technologies like

computers

especially using them for their studies at school.

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some people might believe over usage of

computers

is harmful

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their studies and generally their life and should be avoided at any cost, in my

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there are more

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for studying better and greatly affect

children

's learning in a positive way.

Firstly

, we are living in a technology era and as

the

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time goes all of the systems modernize and develop to assist human in every

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of their lives

therefore

digital tools like

computers

and smartphones can provide a comprehensive learning system which can be available for everyone especially those who doesn't access to private schools and adequate supplements to prepare for exams.

Secondly

, with the wide range of applications and websites,

children

can learn by playing games which is enjoyable and

easy going

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way and encourages them to learn more with advanced paths

instead

of physical books that are overwhelming and hard to focus on for some

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students.The impact of learning with various apps has been examined through different

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Cambridge University and the results show that young pupils prefer studying with digital apps rather than conventional methods that have been used for decades before.These methods help them to learn faster and organize the subjects better in their minds. in conclusion, personally, I disagree with the opinion

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dependecy

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dependence

on

computers

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negative

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effect on

children

's skills like writing and reading. I believe the advantages of using them surpass the disadvantages and

although

there might be some general side effects like keeping youngsters busy and away from their studies, these challenges can be faced and solved with proper time management and parental supervision.