you have just read an article in a national news paper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with the article were published in your newspaper on 21 September.
This
article claimed that town centers
in the country all look very similar to each other, but I partially disagree with Change the spelling
centres
this
idea. From an environmental viewpoint, your idea is correct. This
means that each city benefits from ample parks and trees. In addition
, each city has enough factories and industries.
To explain more, our town has access to some prestigious universities and the standard of living is higher than other
similar towns. Our city has access to 3 hospitals and 4 unique laboratories, Change preposition
in other
also
students from all around the country apply to study at its universities. In terms of these options, our town is different from other cities in the county.
Therefore
, I recommend that you give an expert tour guide in order to edit information about towns to the writer of your article.
I hope my modest proposal will be considered.
Yours faithfully,
Mah KaSubmitted by kargar.mh1992 on
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task achievement
Address the minor grammatical errors and refine your vocabulary to strengthen your writing. Consider using varied sentence structures.
coherence cohesion
Improve the organizational structure by ensuring each paragraph sticks to a single idea and flows logically to the next.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear opening and closing, and it maintains a polite and formal tone throughout.
complete response
The content of the letter addresses the task effectively, including three key points: agreement, differences, and a proposal for a guided tour.