The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph demonstrates the quantity of waste manufactured by three companies from 2000 to 2015
One striking feature is that
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three companies illustrate significant changes in the amounts of waste Remove the comma
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decrease
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Company
C over the period .
The highest indication was company
A amounted to 12 tonnes
waste and the lowest proportion was Company
C accounted for 4 tonnes
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B showed 8 tonnes
in 2000
Company
B showed Correct article usage
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tonnes
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A demonstrated Correct article usage
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tonnes
. Company
C illustrated sharply grow
which equal to 10 Replace the word
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tonnes
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