The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The given line graph depicts information about the wastage generated by three organizations from 2000 to 2015
Overall
,
company
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companies
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A and
B
reduced their waste material
while
company
C
produced more useless materials during the given time period.
The
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begin
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with
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of
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2000
instution
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institution
C
generated almost 4 tonnes of waste products
whereas
company
B
produced double useless things of it and for
company
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company,
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A the production of
wastage
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was three folds. In next five years, organizations
B
and
C
followed the upward trend and reached to about 10 and 6 respectively. At the meantime
company
A adapted the downward trend and came down 1 tone
Furthermore
, in the next ten years and
B
decreased their waste production and in the final year ended at around 8 and 3
accordingly
. Whilst the useless materials of
Company
C
inclined and approached almost 10 in the
last
year
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