The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The given diagram depicts information on
production
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the production
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of one type of biofuel
that
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apply
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named
as
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ethanol
.
Overall
, it is an
11 stage
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, man-made process,
begins
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that begins
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with the
consuming
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consumption
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of
carbon
dioxide
and sunlight as the energy source by plants, and some chemicals and microbes being added to cellulose
that is
produced from harvest and ends with the emitting
carbon
footprint from vehicles that used
ethanol
as the biofuel. First of all, plants and other trees absorb
carbon
dioxide
and sunlight as the energy source and
then
they are collected as harvest by people. After that,
gathered
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the gathered
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harvest is put into
shredder
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a shredder
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machine in order to decrease the size of it.
Then
pre-processed materials become cellulose, and it is put into some chemicals to process before transforming to
sugar
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a sugar
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compound. Following that, some microorganisms are added to the sugar to
synthesis
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synthesise
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ethanol
, which is one type of biofuel.
Then
created
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ethanol
is used by a lot of means of transport,
such
as cars, trucks and planes. These vehicles emit
carbon
dioxide
into the atmosphere, and
subsequently
, the cycle returns to its initial phase with the consumption of
carbon
dioxide
and sunlight by plants.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, carbon, dioxide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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