The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The given diagram depicts information on
production
of one type of biofuel Add an article
the production
that
named Correct pronoun usage
apply
as
Change preposition
apply
ethanol
.
Overall
, it is an 11 stage
, man-made process, Add a hyphen
11-stage
begins
with the Correct pronoun usage
that begins
consuming
of Replace the word
consumption
carbon
dioxide
and sunlight as the energy source by plants, and some chemicals and microbes being added to cellulose that is
produced from harvest and ends with the emitting carbon
footprint from vehicles that used ethanol
as the biofuel.
First of all, plants and other trees absorb carbon
dioxide
and sunlight as the energy source and then
they are collected as harvest by people. After that, gathered
harvest is put into Correct article usage
the gathered
shredder
machine in order to decrease the size of it. Correct article usage
a shredder
Then
pre-processed materials become cellulose, and it is put into some chemicals to process before transforming to sugar
compound.
Following that, some microorganisms are added to the sugar to Correct article usage
a sugar
synthesis
Replace the word
synthesise
ethanol
, which is one type of biofuel. Then
created
Verb problem
apply
ethanol
is used by a lot of means of transport, such
as cars, trucks and planes. These vehicles emit carbon
dioxide
into the atmosphere, and subsequently
, the cycle returns to its initial phase with the consumption of carbon
dioxide
and sunlight by plants.Submitted by dnm.best on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, carbon, dioxide with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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