Percentage of government spending on road and transport (1990 - 2005)

The provided bar chart gives information about the number of
percentage
which was spent of government on roads and transport in 4 countries over a fifteen-year
period
between 1990 and 2005. Namely Italia, Protugal, UK and USA.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the analyzed
period
the highest percentages of government spending on road and transport was in Portugal,
while
UK had the fewest
percentage
. Getting back to the details beginning of the analyzed
period
the highest
percentage
was Portugal, that indicator was approximatelly 27%,
by contrast
following years the
percentage
dropped significantly.
While
the
percentage
of the USA increased slightly by 2005 peaked at 15%. During the analyzed
period
the figures of the other two countries fluctuated marginally. In 1990 the figure of Itlia was close to 23,
then
dropped negligibly, exactly the same thing happened in that moment. By 2000 the figure in UK was 12 approximately,
then
decreased to 8%. At that moment
percentage
in Italia was 24% and 17% respectively.
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task achievement
Make sure each country is discussed consistently and clearly to enhance the clarity of your comparisons.
coherence cohesion
Avoid repetition and ensure each sentence contributes new information to prevent redundancy.
coherence cohesion
Provide a clear conclusion summarizing the key trends and comparisons presented in your essay.
task achievement
The essay provides a comprehensive overview of government spending on roads and transport.
coherence cohesion
Key trends in spending across different countries are identified and compared.
coherence cohesion
An appropriate structure is maintained with an introduction outlining the report's focus.

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