The graph below gives information about household computer possession in one European country between 1997 and 2011.

The graph below gives information about household computer possession in one European country between 1997 and 2011.
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The line chart illustrates how household computer possession changed in one European country from 1997 to 2011. During the period, the
number
of
households
possessing one computer only, two
computers
as well as
three or more
computers
increased, but it was the
number
of
households
with three or more
computers
that stood out as it was far higher than the
number
of others, rising from about 42 to around 44.
However
, the
number
of
households
having two
computers
saw a significant growth from nearly 5 in 1997 to just below 30 in 2011. The
number
of
households
with one computer was always the lowest, no more than 10 during the whole period.
By contrast
, the
number
of
households
without
computers
experienced a dramatic fall between 1997 and 2011. From approximately 50, the largest figure at the beginning, there was a stable decrease of 10 until 2005, when it started to rise to the peak of 40, followed by a considerable drop by 2007.
Finally
, it ended at just over 20, which was smaller than the
number
of
households
with three or more
computers
and two
computers
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the total
number
of
households
with
computers
grew during the 14 years.
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