The diagram below shows the process for preparing food for space missions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the process of preparing
food
for space missions.The procedure involves nine important stages with precise planning and observation.
Firstly
, the menu was planned by 2 scientists and it was conducted to decide on appropriate food
items. Then
, some of the food
is pre-cooked in the oven before being air-dried. Following
this
, the food
is packed into individual portions and the food
is washed by chlorine rinse to ensure cleanliness and safety. Once the food
is cleaned, it is loaded into a truck and transported to the space centre, where the food
will be placed into the shuttle lockers, which are ready for the mission. Finally
, when the astronauts need to consume the food
, it is reconstituted and reheated, making it suitable for eating in space.
Overall
, this
whole process ensures that the food
is able to be consumed safely and easily by the astronauts during their journey, and the process is a complex one that is
both labour and capital intensive
.Add a hyphen
capital-intensive
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