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The plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

#plans #site #airport #redevelopment #year
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illustrated
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 the layout of
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Southwest Airport now and its future plans on it in the next year.
Overall
, the airport will see huge reconstruction and expansion with significant changes. It can be seen that the main building is
devided
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divided
 into two parts: for departures with its check-in in the west,
cafe
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a cafe
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 in the east and Security Passport Control on the left side and
arrivials
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arrivals
 with Passport Control Customs on the right, which
is leading
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 to 8 Gates with Walkway.
According to
 the plans the place will
be dramatically change
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 by
recounstructing
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reconstructing
 and expanding Gates into 18 with its Sky Train. On
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the departures
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departures
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 side of the
building
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 the cafe and check-in will be swapped and a new bag stop will be opened,
as well as
 shops to the north.
On the other hand
, a new cafe, ATM and car hire will be constructed on the arrivals side by expanding the building.
However
, two Passport Controls will stay unchanged.
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Improve coherence by organizing ideas in a more logical sequence, ensuring smooth transitions between points.
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Provide clearer explanations and details to enhance the clarity and depth of your ideas.
general
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The essay clearly identifies and compares the current and future layouts of the airport.
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The essay provides specific details on the changes to different sections of the airport.
language use
Use of directional language and specific descriptors to describe the layout is effective.

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