Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to report fram to damaged the
road
near my house. I live in a residential area on Hilton Street. The address of my house is BVL James, BLD Bond, No 21, floor 1. Recently, The
road
in front of my house is damaged. Unfortunately, We always face serious difficulties
such
as heavy traffic and major accidents that are the reason apparently the
road
has been damaged.
However
, I do not park my car in the parking.
Also
, my neighbours have problems
such
as crashing their cars.
Overall
, I request to local council that sooner repair the
road
. I decided to collaborate with your employers so that the problem will be solved.
Moreover
, I suggest that the repair and reconstruction of the
road
should be done very quickly because it may cause loss of life. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Mohsen Ijbari
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coherence cohesion
Ensure to organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each covering a single idea, such as introduction, problem description, and suggestions.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the road damage and its implications to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, making it polite and formal.
task achievement
You have maintained a professional tone, which is suitable for addressing the local council.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Grievance
  • Deterioration
  • Hazardous
  • Impede
  • Inconvenience
  • Potholes
  • Cracks
  • Collapsed
  • Uneven
  • Detour
  • Repair
  • Maintenance
  • Investigation
  • Infrastructure
  • Expenditure
  • Resolution
  • Improvement
  • Community
  • Resident
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Traffic congestion
  • Civic
  • Enquiry
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