The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asia regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how the populations of different
regions
will change from 1950 and also
forecasts until 2300. All six regions
, namely Western Asia
, India
, Other South-Central Asia
, South-Eastern Asia
, China
, and Other Eastern Asia
, commenced their movement in 1950. Other South-Central Asia
, South-Eastern Asia
, India
, and China
started from the same point at 40 in 1950, whereas
Western Asia
begun
at slightly greater than 40 and Other Eastern Add the auxiliary verb
began
Asia
commenced at around 54 in 1950.
Overall
, the populations of numerous regions
have been roughly increasing in the period from 1950 until 2300. Areas such
as Other South-Central Asia
, South-Eastern Asia
, Western Asia
, and India
have been gently rising since 1950 and at the end
of 2300 will reach about 90. While
regions
such
as Other Eastern Asia
have been soaring to almost 100 in 2300 and China
has been peaking at approximately 94 in 2300.
Firstly
, gradual movement is shown by the following regions
: India
, Other South-Central Asia
, Western Asia
, and South-Eastern Asia
; they have been modestly going up from 40 to about 78, then
China
is significantly climbing to 90, while
other regions
are evenly fluctuating to around 89.
Secondly
, a noticeable upward trend is shown by China
and Other Eastern Asia
; they have started almost at the same point, but for China
it is 40 and for Other Eastern Add a comma
China,
Asia
it is above 50. Then
, they have been unevenly rising; after that, Other Eastern Asia
has reached slightly under 80 and then
has carried on its extreme upward movement toward just under 100, while
China
has begun moving extremely upward to about under 70, then
commenced maintaining the same trend in the long run to approximately 95 in 2300.Submitted by acaitaz on
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