The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asia regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates how the populations of different
regions
will change from 1950 and
also
forecasts until 2300. All six
regions
, namely Western
Asia
,
India
, Other South-Central
Asia
, South-Eastern
Asia
,
China
, and Other Eastern
Asia
, commenced their movement in 1950. Other South-Central
Asia
, South-Eastern
Asia
,
India
, and
China
started from the same point at 40 in 1950,
whereas
Western
Asia
begun
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at slightly greater than 40 and Other Eastern
Asia
commenced at around 54 in 1950.
Overall
, the populations of numerous
regions
have been roughly increasing in the period from 1950 until 2300. Areas
such
as Other South-Central
Asia
, South-Eastern
Asia
, Western
Asia
, and
India
have been gently rising since 1950 and
at the end
of 2300 will reach about 90.
While
regions
such
as Other Eastern
Asia
have been soaring to almost 100 in 2300 and
China
has been peaking at approximately 94 in 2300.
Firstly
, gradual movement is shown by the following
regions
:
India
, Other South-Central
Asia
, Western
Asia
, and South-Eastern
Asia
; they have been modestly going up from 40 to about 78,
then
China
is significantly climbing to 90,
while
other
regions
are evenly fluctuating to around 89.
Secondly
, a noticeable upward trend is shown by
China
and Other Eastern
Asia
; they have started almost at the same point, but for
China
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it is 40 and for Other Eastern
Asia
it is above 50.
Then
, they have been unevenly rising; after that, Other Eastern
Asia
has reached slightly under 80 and
then
has carried on its extreme upward movement toward just under 100,
while
China
has begun moving extremely upward to about under 70,
then
commenced maintaining the same trend in the long run to approximately 95 in 2300.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words regions, asia, india, china with synonyms.
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