The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asia regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how the populations of different
regions
will change from 1950 and Use synonyms
also
forecasts until 2300. All six Linking Words
regions
, namely Western Use synonyms
Asia
, Use synonyms
India
, Other South-Central Use synonyms
Asia
, South-Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
, Use synonyms
China
, and Other Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
, commenced their movement in 1950. Other South-Central Use synonyms
Asia
, South-Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
, Use synonyms
India
, and Use synonyms
China
started from the same point at 40 in 1950, Use synonyms
whereas
Western Linking Words
Asia
Use synonyms
begun
at slightly greater than 40 and Other Eastern Add the auxiliary verb
began
Asia
commenced at around 54 in 1950.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the populations of numerous Linking Words
regions
have been roughly increasing in the period from 1950 until 2300. Areas Use synonyms
such
as Other South-Central Linking Words
Asia
, South-Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
, Western Use synonyms
Asia
, and Use synonyms
India
have been gently rising since 1950 and Use synonyms
at the end
of 2300 will reach about 90. Linking Words
While
Linking Words
regions
Use synonyms
such
as Other Eastern Linking Words
Asia
have been soaring to almost 100 in 2300 and Use synonyms
China
has been peaking at approximately 94 in 2300.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, gradual movement is shown by the following Linking Words
regions
: Use synonyms
India
, Other South-Central Use synonyms
Asia
, Western Use synonyms
Asia
, and South-Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
; they have been modestly going up from 40 to about 78, Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
China
is significantly climbing to 90, Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
regions
are evenly fluctuating to around 89.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, a noticeable upward trend is shown by Linking Words
China
and Other Eastern Use synonyms
Asia
; they have started almost at the same point, but for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
China
it is 40 and for Other Eastern Add a comma
China,
Asia
it is above 50. Use synonyms
Then
, they have been unevenly rising; after that, Other Eastern Linking Words
Asia
has reached slightly under 80 and Use synonyms
then
has carried on its extreme upward movement toward just under 100, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
China
has begun moving extremely upward to about under 70, Use synonyms
then
commenced maintaining the same trend in the long run to approximately 95 in 2300.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words regions, asia, india, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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