You are interested in studying on a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why describe your educational background and work experience and say why you would like to study at that college.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I writing to express my interest

to study

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in studying

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4 months

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4-month

course at your

college

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in Toronto, Canada. My name is Pramod, and I am working as a developer in a tech company in India. As a

software

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developer, I want to upgrade my skill sets, so I want to take

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Software

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a Software

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Development course at your institution. It would not only educate about updated programming languages but

also

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allow networking with fellow developers. I have a master’s degree in computer science from Delhi University in India. I took part in many programming code camps

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apply

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and won certifications and

prices

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prizes

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college

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fees were covered through the scholarship I

recevied

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received

, because of my excellent academic record. Currently, I have been working as a junior

software

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developer in one of the

reknown

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renown

renowned

tech

company

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in Delhi for 2 years. I

heared

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heard

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about your

college

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from a colleague that the

college

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has the

phenominal

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phenomenal

cource

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course

source

for

the

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apply

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software

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developers,

therefore

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I decided to take

this

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programme. Hoping to

here

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hear

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from you soon. Yours sincerely, Pramod

Darshita@8612Thu Oct 31 2024

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language

Improve grammar and spelling by checking for errors like "I writing" and "I heared." This will enhance clarity and professionalism.

coherence cohesion

Structure could be improved by separating details about your educational background and work experience into distinct paragraphs.

task achievement

The letter addresses the prompt by clearly stating the course of interest and your motivations.

coherence cohesion

Well-segmented paragraphs that mostly stick to a single idea help to convey messages effectively.

coherence cohesion

The use of appropriate formal greeting and closing showcases a suitable writing tone.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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