At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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youth

really

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perfect for our future. We need to fresh brain and fast

progress

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brain. That's why

youth

indeed

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is indeed

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good

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key for us we can easily accept

this

thing. İn addition, If

youth

more

then

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older

people

it's exactly good news as

result

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a result

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of

youth

who

hard-working

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are hard-working

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and more clever

then

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older

people

. Older

people

doesn'

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t

understand most

of

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thing

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they need

a

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help

for

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understanding and perception.

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are

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situation should be

so

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hard. Maybe they have experience for life

for

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instance, they lived so many years in the world and they are wiser

then

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youth

but they

can'

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t

walk nowhere if younger

people

doesn'

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don't

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t

help. As

youth

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youth,

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we should learn our

grandfather

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grandfather's

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or

grandmother

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grandmother's

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knowledge.

Government

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want to constant population for both

side

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because for a country that

need

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to

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younger and older

people

as

result

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a result

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of

at

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both part important for developing. Nowadays, mostly younger

people

achieve something like big business but older

people

already achieved something that's why they are just sitting

their

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in their

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home or they

continued

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developing themself. If one younger

people

want to improve yourself he is quickly can develop yourself but ı can'

t

say

same

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the same

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thing for older

people

because their mind

function

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functions

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substantial different

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substantially differently

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.

To sum up

, we have to include both younger and older

people

. As I mentioned before

for

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a country

need

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needs

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to good condition. Extra, ages

strongly

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are strongly

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significant. All

kind

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kinds

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of ages carrying big

essential

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essentials

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for

future

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the future

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we have to

this

order.

İf

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İf,

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we don'

t

order

this

arrangement and we don'

t

listen

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listen to

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youth

or older

people

we can'

t

achieve major intention.