The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two provided charts describe the proportions of travellers
visited
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who visited
to
Orange Remove the preposition
apply
city
in two distinctive years, 2006 and 2016 Capitalize word
City
as well as
depict the list of activities the tourist was attracted to such
as theartre
, Correct your spelling
theatre
theatres
restaurants
, museums
, annual events
and other
.
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others
Overall
, in 2006, the total number of visitor
to the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
city
was approximately 1 million whereas
after a decade it increased by nine hundred thousand. While
,
the primary reason Remove the comma
apply
of
visiting the region was annual Change preposition
for
events
in 2006, it becomes
Wrong verb form
became
secondry
in 2016. Correct your spelling
secondary
second
However
, individuals got more intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
restaurants
in 2016 making it main
cause of their Correct article usage
the main
visit
.
Having a glance at the pie charts, it is evident that in 2006, 45% of Fix the agreement mistake
visits
tourist
used to attend annual Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
events
in metropolitan
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the metropolitan
whereas
more than Correct article usage
a quater
quater
were Correct your spelling
quarter
intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
museums
(27%). The theatres (13%) and restaurants
(11%) were almost equally popular with the
Correct article usage
a
diffrence
of 3 Correct your spelling
difference
percentage
. Just 5% was individuals used to come to the Replace the word
per cent
city
for other reasons.
After a decade, significant
change was noticed in the Add an article
a significant
prefrences
of travellers. Correct your spelling
preferences
While
restaurants
had sheer
Correct article usage
a sheer
one tenth
of travellers in 2006, it Add a hyphen
one-tenth
become
major Wrong verb form
became
reasons
behind having more Fix the agreement mistake
reason
tourist
in the Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
city
with the
ratio of 41% in 2016. Followed by, annual Correct article usage
a
events
and museums
which was
32% and 11% respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Although
, other Correct word choice
However
motive
Fix the agreement mistake
motives
or
going to Correct your spelling
for
museums
was
at Correct subject-verb agreement
were
similar
point other Add an article
a similar
that
Correct word choice
than
was
8% in 2016.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, restaurants, museums, events with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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