You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram depicts how many people in three nations move from the countryside to the city and predictions for 2025. In general, the population in the city of every country has increased because of people's immigration over the past 20 years.

First,

in 2000, about 10-20

million

humans moved from rural to urban areas and the number of Russians was the highest among the other two countries.

Additionally

, the figure has dramatically risen

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and made more and more difference with others until it was surpassed by Irans.

According to

the chart, the figure for Irans who migrated to the big city has been below Indonesians until approximately 2026 when the statistics of the two nations were equivalent. Since

then

, the statistics have rocketed up and

then

it reached the same as Russians in 2021.

Moreover

, the population started at over 80

million

, and it is predicted that it will ultimately culminate in 95

million

in 2025,

whereas

below 90

million

Russians moved to the metropolis.

Finally

, the number who migrate to the metropolis in Indonesia has been under 30

million

until 2020 on average. Following that, the population reached 30

million

and it has remained flat since 2020 and still, the figure is believed to stay unchanged in 2025.

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