The first chart below shows the number of British visitors to the US and American visitors to the UK from 2011 to 2015. The second chart shows the amount spent by those visitors in that period. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the
number
of individuals who visited US
from Correct article usage
the US
UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
UK
from Correct article usage
the UK
US
and Correct article usage
the US
also
depicts the money
spent by these individuals from 2011 to 2015.
After analysing the graph, it can be clearly seen that 33000 individuals from UK
visited Correct article usage
the UK
US
in 2011 Correct article usage
the US
while
27000 visited UK
in the same year and Correct article usage
the UK
money
spent by Correct article usage
the money
UK
tourists was higher than US
, Correct article usage
the US
was
around about 4000 Unnecessary verb
apply
dollar
.In 2012 the Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
number
of visitors
was almost equal in both countries and Uk
tourists spent amount larger than US.Correct your spelling
UK
Whereas
, the digits of UK
visitors
and cash spent by Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
Correct your spelling
UK
was
greater than US in 2013.
Moving towards, the figures Correct subject-verb agreement
were
of
Change preposition
for
visitors
and money
spent by UK
both increased in 2014 as compared to Correct article usage
the UK
US
.Correct article usage
the US
Whilst in
the Correct word choice
In
last
year the number
of Uk
Correct your spelling
UK
visitors
was
climbed to 3500 and spending amount was Unnecessary verb
apply
also
reached to uppest value about
6000 Change preposition
of about
millions
Change to singular
million
however
US tourists was
acerlated but spending was low in 2015.
Change the verb form
were
Overall
, it is noticeable that the number
of US visitors
was upper
but Correct word choice
higher
money
spent by US visitors
was down as compared to UK
.Correct article usage
the UK
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, money, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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