Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie chart shows in which location of an Australian town dance classes are being held, and the bar chart illustrates the number of attendees.
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It is clear that
,
private studios are the most common location for Remove the comma
apply
dance
classes
. Overall
, ballet is the most popular kind of dance
with young people under 11, while
children between 11 and 16 would rather participate in modern dance
classes
.
As depicted in the pie chart, private studios accommodate almost half of the classes
in this
town. School halls, which have after-school programs, and community halls and other places account for almost 20 per cent of the classes
. However
, the fewest classes
(at 10%) are in college-based studios.
It can be seen that,
Ballet which is the most popular kind of Remove the comma
apply
dance
among children under 11, is the least favourable for participants between 11 and 16, respectively 600 and 300 students
. The opposite pattern goes for modern dance
. Whereas
it has the most number of students
between 11 and 16, it is the least liked by students
under 11. Tap classes
receive almost the same number of students
(about 450).Submitted by faranakasadzadian on
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