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43.The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

43.The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides key information about the
cost
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 of water in Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth, and Sydney. The units are measured in dollars.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the average bill per
household
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 has the highest
cost
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, Adelaide and Perth have the same come of
usage
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 charge up to 125
KL
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.
According to
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 what is shown Adelaide's
usage
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 charge per kilolitre up to 125 was
cost
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 0.42 which is the least number and for over 125
KL
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 it costs 1 dollar but the average bill per
household
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 costs 312$. Brisbane
usage
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 charge per kilolitre up to 125
KL
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 and over125LK has a nearly similar
cost
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, and the average was 310. Melbourne
usage
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 charges per kilolitre up to 125
KL
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 and over125LK have a similar
cost
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 of 0.78 dollars
whereas
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 the lowest
cost
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 was in an average bill per
household
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. In terms of, Sydney has the same
cost
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 for up to 125
kl
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 and over 125kl 0.98$. Perth has the highest
cost
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 for average bills per
household
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 332$.
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