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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram demonstrates the influx of
people
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 from suburbs to metropolitan areas in three distinct cities over the past twenty
years
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 and the prediction for 2025.
Overall
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, all the countries show an upward pattern.
However
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, Indonesia illustrates an insignificant increase rate.
To begin
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 with, in Russia and Iran, the figures started at 18
million
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 and 9
million
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 respectively.
Nevertheless
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, the
number
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 of Russian
people
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 approximately doubled after 10
years
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 to 40
million
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. In 2015,
this
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number
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 sharply increased to 70
million
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. In the next decade, the
number
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 of
people
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 will increase gradually and it is predicted to be just under 90
million
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 individuals.
In addition
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 to
this
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, Iranian
people
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 did not move and the capacity remained stable for five
years
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. After 15
years
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,
this
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number
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 rocketed suddenly by five times to 50
million
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. They anticipate that the
number
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 will be doubled to 100
million
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 in 2025.
Conversely
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, the
number
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 of Indonesian
people
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 surged dramatically and tripled to 30
million
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 individuals. These figures will stay constant in 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years, million, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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