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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram demonstrates the influx of
people
 from suburbs to metropolitan areas in three distinct cities over the past twenty
years
 and the prediction for 2025.
Overall
, all the countries show an upward pattern.
However
, Indonesia illustrates an insignificant increase rate.
To begin
 with, in Russia and Iran, the figures started at 18
million
 and 9
million
 respectively.
Nevertheless
, the
number
 of Russian
people
 approximately doubled after 10
years
 to 40
million
. In 2015,
this
number
 sharply increased to 70
million
. In the next decade, the
number
 of
people
 will increase gradually and it is predicted to be just under 90
million
 individuals.
In addition
 to
this
, Iranian
people
 did not move and the capacity remained stable for five
years
. After 15
years
,
this
number
 rocketed suddenly by five times to 50
million
. They anticipate that the
number
 will be doubled to 100
million
 in 2025.
Conversely
, the
number
 of Indonesian
people
 surged dramatically and tripled to 30
million
 individuals. These figures will stay constant in 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years, million, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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