The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Tha table below
illustrate
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social and economic
indictors
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indicators
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for 4 countries (
Canada
,
Japan
, Peru,
Angola
) in 1994,
accroeding
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according
to United
Nation
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Nations
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statistics.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Canade
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Canada
had the highest numbers in all indicators
espect
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except
life expectancy of birth.
Moreover
,
Angola
had the lowest level in all indicators.
To begin
with, for annual income per person (in
dollers
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dollars
)
Canada
had the highest value 11,100$, followed by
Japan
15,760$.
Additionally
, for
adult
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the adult
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liferacy
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literacy
rate
Canada
and
Japan
had the same value
99
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, after that Preu had 68, and
finally
the lowest one was
Angola
. For daily
calories
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supply per person,
Angola
had the lowest one 1749
person
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persons
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,the the highest value was
Canada
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3326.
Therefore
, for life
ecpectancy
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expectancy
of
birth
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birth,
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Japan
had the highest level 78, Peru had 51,
Canada
76, and
finally
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the
loswet
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lowest
lowset
is
Angola
had 47.
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