The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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social and economic

indictors

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indicators

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for 4 countries (

Canada

Japan

, Peru,

Angola

) in 1994,

accroeding

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according

to United

Nation

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Nations

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statistics.

Overall

it is clear that

Canade

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Canada

had the highest numbers in all indicators

espect

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except

life expectancy of birth.

Moreover

Angola

had the lowest level in all indicators.

To begin

with, for annual income per person (in

dollers

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dollars

)

Canada

had the highest value 11,100$, followed by

Japan

15,760$.

Additionally

, for

adult

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liferacy

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literacy

rate

Canada

and

Japan

had the same value

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, after that Preu had 68, and

finally

the lowest one was

Angola

. For daily

calories

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supply per person,

Angola

had the lowest one 1749

person

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persons

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,the the highest value was

Canada

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3326.

Therefore

, for life

ecpectancy

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expectancy

birth

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Japan

had the highest level 78, Peru had 51,

Canada

76, and

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the

loswet

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lowest

lowset

Angola

had 47.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication that some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people beleive that high sugar levels cause more health problems. make it more expensive to reduce the health issues. do you agree or disagree ?

In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

Many supermarket are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. what are the reason for this? is this a positive or negative development?