The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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illustrate

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illustrates

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social and economic

indictors

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indicators

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for 4 countries (

Canada

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Japan

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, Peru,

Angola

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) in 1994,

accroeding

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according

to United

Nation

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Nations

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statistics.

Overall

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it is clear that

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Canade

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Canada

had the highest numbers in all indicators

espect

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except

life expectancy of birth.

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Angola

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had the lowest level in all indicators.

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with, for annual income per person (in

dollers

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dollars

)

Canada

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had the highest value 11,100$, followed by

Japan

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15,760$.

Additionally

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, for

adult

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the adult

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liferacy

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literacy

rate

Canada

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and

Japan

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had the same value

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of 99

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, after that Preu had 68, and

finally

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the lowest one was

Angola

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. For daily

calories

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calorie

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supply per person,

Angola

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had the lowest one 1749

person

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persons

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,the the highest value was

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Canada

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3326.

Therefore

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, for life

ecpectancy

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expectancy

birth

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birth,

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Japan

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had the highest level 78, Peru had 51,

Canada

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76, and

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finally

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the

loswet

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lowest

lowset

Angola

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had 47.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, japan, angola with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

138 words

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities

Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student's home country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The increase in production and consumption of meat has resulted in the destruction of the natural environment. What is the cause?What can be done to solve the problem?

Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better.