The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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indictors
for 4 countries (Correct your spelling
indicators
Canada
, Japan
, Peru, Angola
) in 1994, accroeding
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according
Nation
statistics.
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Nations
Overall
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had the highest numbers in all indicators Correct your spelling
Canada
espect
life expectancy of birth. Correct your spelling
except
Moreover
, Angola
had the lowest level in all indicators.
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with, for annual income per person (in dollers
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dollars
Canada
had the highest value 11,100$, followed by Japan
15,760$. Additionally
, for adult
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the adult
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rate Correct your spelling
literacy
Canada
and Japan
had the same value 99
, after that Preu had 68, and Change preposition
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finally
the lowest one was Angola
.
For daily calories
supply per person, Change the noun form
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Angola
had the lowest one 1749 person
,the the highest value was Fix the agreement mistake
persons
Canada
3326. Change noun form
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, for life ecpectancy
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expectancy
birth
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birth,
Japan
had the highest level 78, Peru had 51, Canada
76, and finally
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lowest
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