Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is more widely accepted that students settle down in professions that are not related to their university majors, and youngsters keep changing their

jobs

until they find their true

passion

.

While some

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people argue that

individuals

should focus on specific

jobs

and professions in order to progress along their career path efficiently. Personally, I do not agree with the idea that sticking to

one

job is the best way to achieve

success

, rather, it is worth taking a detour to find destinations that suit them. On the

one

hand, as the saying goes “practice makes perfect”, many successful figures in

the

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history specialized in

one

area and

finally

achieved monumental

success

. The snowball effect shows as

individuals

keep accumulating and honing expertise and skills, they will become experts as time goes by.

Therefore

,

instead

of always changing minds, focusing on

one

area would be more down-to-earth and efficient.

In addition

, many

jobs

require either previous education or experience in the field.

As a result

, impulsive thinking about switching to another job can be unrealistic.

For instance

, accountants cannot directly perform lawyers’ roles without education or training.

On the other hand

, even though

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days in and out is more likely to yield

success

than having a shallow taste in a variety of

jobs

, the latter should not be considered equal to searching for and hunting the dream

jobs

.

Firstly

, many students nowadays choose the majors after considering their parents’ willingness, after years, some of them may find these majors

are

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boring and aspire to do other things after graduation. Indeed,

individuals

may find

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to perform the roles which they dislike, especially assuming to persist for decades. What’s more, once people find what really

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and

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them, they are more likely to invest time and effort in their areas, but with satisfaction towards work and life. In my opinion, seeking

passion

is more essential than succeeding in professions that

individuals

have no feelings for. Life should be depicted with texture and

passion

,

instead

of just to be tolerable or realistic.

Moreover

, the freedom to choose

jobs

is the gift and privilege given by our parents, who hope their children live happily and passionately. What youngsters today can do is

to

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cherish the chances to find and commit to their desires. There are many ways towards

success

. In conclusion,

while

starting and committing to

one

career can be rewarding and efficient, people may miss sceneries and adventures along the life journey without more choices that they can choose from. Personally, I believe it

worth

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adventuring until locating your

passion

,

success

is

also

in

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length as long as time and effort are invested

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