Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is widely observed that many

parents

nowadays put their

children

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extreme pressure for the sake of their

children

's

success

, others argue that

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experiences of the

parents

that contribute to

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, whether

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intensifying pressure from the

parents

will benefit

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society or not will be discussed

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To begin

with, it seems sensible for some to believe that the trend of parenting that

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on

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success

happens for a reason. Many

parents

experiences

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hardship and struggle in their past and they viewed that intensive

competitions

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in

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world is as scary as war

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. In order to be outstanding among others, they must

be succeed

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in some ways for

parents

to relieve about their child's future. As a

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,

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could bring about two

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of agreements.

Firstly

, many might agree that

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fostering

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children

to slowly adapt to

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adulthood without being

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as the real world is much more cruel

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them. It

also

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a way to teach them to manage

with

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stress and obstacles on their own.

However

, others might

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that

this

can

leads

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to overexpose of stress for the

children

as they are not mature enough, making them

to

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become

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on their

parents

.

Therefore

, I personally argue in favour of

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side seeing that

children

are vulnerable to stress and

this

could make them t In summary,

although

it is undeniable that

parents

put so much effort on their

children

to be

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as a fear of their own pasts.

While

pressurizing

on

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children

for

success

can be positively viewed as a transient phase for adulthood, I am of the opinion that

this

can bring about detrimental

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effects

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on them like the loss of

automy

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autonomy

and mental breakdown from being stressed out.