There should only be one government in the world rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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worldwide, there should be only one government rather than many
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for each country. Personally, I
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many aspects
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those nations
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the location, climate, etc
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Your essay introduces an interesting perspective on global governance.
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The introduction provides a clear statement of your position.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized decision-making
  • global challenges
  • territorial disputes
  • economies of scale
  • policy implementation
  • cultural homogenization
  • national sovereignty
  • internal conflicts
  • authoritarianism
  • individual freedoms
  • global governance
  • unification
  • efficiency
  • resource allocation
  • social systems
  • governing body
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