The two pie charts show the average spending of households in a country at two different points in its economic development.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
used for different purposes
in six regions worldwide.
Overall
, it is clear that
primary water
was used for agricultural purposes
in South America
, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
while
North America
and Europe
used primary water
for industrial purposes
. Remarkably, the highest proportion of water
was used for Agricultural aims, specially
, in Central Replace the word
especially
Asia
.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that over three-fourths of water
was allocated for agricultural purposes
in South East Asian, Africa, and Central Asia
, with 81%, 84% and 88%, respectively, followed by South America
, with 71%, finally
, North America
and Europe
, with 39% and 32%, respectively. By contrast
, Europe
used over half of the total water
for industrial purposes
, with 53%, next is North America
, with 48%, and other areas used only under 12% for this
purpose.
Eventually, there are over 10% of the water
used for domestic aims in North America
, South America
, and Europe
however
only under 10% of water
were distributed for this
purpose in Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, purposes, america, asia, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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