You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart

illustrate

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the amount of money dedicated to developing countries by five different

estabilishments

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establishments

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, it is clearly evident that

organixation

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organization

organisation

2 devoted

highest

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amount of money in 2011 and 2010,

while

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organization 3 allocated more money from 2008 to 2009.

On the other hand

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, establishment 4 had the least contribution

overall

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According to

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the chart, in 2008, organization 3 gave 1.5

billion

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dollars

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and in 2009,

increaded

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increased

it to almost 1.75

billion

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dollars

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Then

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, it declined

untill

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until

just

underr

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under

1.5

billion

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dollars

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in 2010.

Following

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this

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, it

experinced

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experienced

a slight

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increase

abd

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and

back to 1.5

billion

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dollars

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by 2011.

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, organization 2 started from

approimately

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approximately

1.5

billion

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dollars

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in 2008

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then

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and then

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increased to 1.5

billion

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dollars

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by 2009. After that, rose dramatically

untill

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until

just under 2.5

billion

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dollars

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in 2010 and

then

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experienced

slight

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a slight

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increas

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increase

to almost 2.6

billion

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dollars

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by 2011 and

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the climax.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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developing countries
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amount
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