You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart
illustrate
the amount of money dedicated to developing countries by five different Change the verb form
illustrates
estabilishments
.
Correct your spelling
establishments
Overall
, it is clearly evident that organixation
2 devoted Correct your spelling
organization
organisation
highest
amount of money in 2011 and 2010, Correct article usage
the highest
while
organization 3 allocated more money from 2008 to 2009. On the other hand
, establishment 4 had the least contribution overall
.
According to
the chart, in 2008, organization 3 gave 1.5 billion
dollars
and in 2009, increaded
it to almost 1.75 Correct your spelling
increased
billion
dollars
. Then
, it declined untill
just Correct your spelling
until
underr
1.5 Correct your spelling
under
billion
dollars
in 2010. Following
this
, it experinced
a slight Correct your spelling
experienced
increas
Correct your spelling
increase
abd
back to 1.5 Correct your spelling
and
billion
dollars
by 2011.
In contrast
, organization 2 started from approimately
1.5 Correct your spelling
approximately
billion
dollars
in 2008 then
increased to 1.5 Correct word choice
and then
billion
dollars
by 2009. After that, rose dramatically untill
just under 2.5 Correct your spelling
until
billion
dollars
in 2010 and then
experienced slight
Correct article usage
a slight
increas
to almost 2.6 Correct your spelling
increase
billion
dollars
by 2011 and reach
the climax.Wrong verb form
reached
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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