The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the local language, finding somewhere to live and making Correct your spelling
learning
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individuals experience in a new society when they emigrate.
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with
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