The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about drink and
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coffee and tea in different countries in Australia, the units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that Hobart
City
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is the highest
while
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Adelaide
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city
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is the lowest.
In addition
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,
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what is shown, in Hobart
city
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, people
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went to a cafe for coffee or tea was 63 per cent,
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in Adelaide
city
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was 50 per cent. In terms of, Melbourne and Sydney was nearly the results between 60% and 65%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • survey
  • habit
  • fresh coffee
  • instant coffee
  • purchases
  • trends
  • compare
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • preferences
  • feature
  • relevant
  • highlight
  • potential reasons
  • explanation
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