What are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports center that you visit. Write a letter to the sports center manager. In your letter: -Explain the problem. -Say how you feel about this problem. -Say what steps you would like the manager to take.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that currently I
used
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the changing rooms in your
sports
centre and I am not satisfied with the service. Recently, I had a
sports
tournment
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tournament
of basketball in your
sports
centre but I have a college exam on that day
also
. So, after when I returned from
my
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college and went to
room
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my room
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to change my clothes, I
feel
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felt
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discomfort. Actually, I felt so uncomfortable at that time because the door lock was not working properly and I
feel
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felt
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unsafe
while
changing clothes as there
are
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were
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so many people outside the
sports
room. I request you to please check
the
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all the locks of the doors as it is very important so that all the participants feel safe
while
changing their clothes. Yours faithfully, Simranjeet
kaur
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Kaur
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Keep paragraphs focused on single ideas to enhance clarity.
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The letter covers all the required points: explanation of the problem, feelings about it, and a suggestion for the center manager.
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The tone is polite and formal, which is appropriate for addressing a manager.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.

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