The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart provides data on the reasons why the
land
suitable for agriculture becomes non-productive
while
the table depicts the effects of
the
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certain
causes
on particular
hree
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three
parts of the globe in the year 1990.
Overall
, over-grazing is the most renowned cause behind the worldwide
land
degradation
process followed by deforestation, over-cultivation and other miscellaneous
causes
while
the European region was the most sufferer
by
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all of the
causes
during 1990 with a certain amount of degraded
land
.
Due to
the excessive population number, more farmlands are needed and more animals are needed to fed.
That is
why, grazing is, an alarming issue and the chart is
the
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proof that the number is 35%, followed by
land
degradation
caused by deforestation (30%)
whereas
over-cultivation
causes
28% of the total loss of
lands
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across the world.
However
,
due to
heavy industrialization, Europe was the table topper of the others in the table where
this
region had 23% of their total
land
degraded in 1990, in which deforestation had the largest share with 9.8%.
On the other hand
, North America had less degraded
land
in that time of 1990 with 5%
degradation
of total
land
as they put their full effort into reserving forestlands.
Furthermore
,
due to
heavy
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cattle population, over-grazing had been
the
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major problem in Oceania where 11.3% of
total
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13%
degradation
happened
by
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this
particular phenomenon only in 1990.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, causes, degradation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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