Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many tourists visited three different areas (coast mountains, and lakes) in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
increased over the period of Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
Although
all areas showed some fluctuations; Linking Words
however
, holidaymakers in the coastal area were in the highest position both in the starting and ending periods of Linking Words
time
.
In 1987, the Use synonyms
number
of lake Use synonyms
visitors
was around 10 Use synonyms
thousand
, it increased dramatically with Use synonyms
time
and reached around 50,000 after 1997, which was almost five times its initial level. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it grew considerably again in 2002 and it peaked at around 75 Linking Words
thousand
, which outraced the coast Use synonyms
visitors
at the same Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
However
, it decreased significantly again in the later five years and reached approximately 50 Linking Words
thousand
.
The Use synonyms
number
of people who visited the coast in 1987 was 40,000, which decreased slightly in the next 5 years reaching nearly 37 Use synonyms
thousand
. In the next 15 years, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
escalated over the Use synonyms
time
period and hit approximately 74 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2007. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
visitors
numbers in the hilly areas showed more fluctuations. It finished at 30 Use synonyms
thousand
, which was one and a half times more than its initial level (20,000).Use synonyms
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