Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many tourists visited three different areas (coast mountains, and lakes) in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the number
of visitors
increased over the period of time
. Although
all areas showed some fluctuations; however
, holidaymakers in the coastal area were in the highest position both in the starting and ending periods of time
.
In 1987, the number
of lake visitors
was around 10 thousand
, it increased dramatically with time
and reached around 50,000 after 1997, which was almost five times its initial level. Moreover
, it grew considerably again in 2002 and it peaked at around 75 thousand
, which outraced the coast visitors
at the same time
. However
, it decreased significantly again in the later five years and reached approximately 50 thousand
.
The number
of people who visited the coast in 1987 was 40,000, which decreased slightly in the next 5 years reaching nearly 37 thousand
. In the next 15 years, this
number
escalated over the time
period and hit approximately 74 thousand
in 2007. On the other hand
, the visitors
numbers in the hilly areas showed more fluctuations. It finished at 30 thousand
, which was one and a half times more than its initial level (20,000).Submitted by zobaermasum12 on
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