Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Self- practice :27/11 The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many tourists visited three different areas (coast mountains, and lakes) in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the
number
of
visitors
increased over the period of
time
.
Although
all areas showed some fluctuations;
however
, holidaymakers in the coastal area were in the highest position both in the starting and ending periods of
time
. In 1987, the
number
of lake
visitors
was around 10
thousand
, it increased dramatically with
time
and reached around 50,000 after 1997, which was almost five times its initial level.
Moreover
, it grew considerably again in 2002 and it peaked at around 75
thousand
, which outraced the coast
visitors
at the same
time
.
However
, it decreased significantly again in the later five years and reached approximately 50
thousand
. The
number
of people who visited the coast in 1987 was 40,000, which decreased slightly in the next 5 years reaching nearly 37
thousand
. In the next 15 years,
this
number
escalated over the
time
period and hit approximately 74
thousand
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the
visitors
numbers in the hilly areas showed more fluctuations. It finished at 30
thousand
, which was one and a half times more than its initial level (20,000).
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