You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The bar graph provides How data on the
number
of teacher
, who were spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
Change to a plural noun
teachers
Overall
it can be seen that the teacher
spent teaching in various
four countries Correct word choice
apply
like
Change preposition
apply
Japan
, Spain, Iceland and USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
whereas
there are categories of level
Fix the agreement mistake
levels
such
as primary, lower secondary, and secondary. Furthermore
, the teacher
spent teaching for upper secondary was consistently the highest, and that for primary teachers was always the lowest.
Looking at the crop data in more Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
details
Fix the agreement mistake
detail
it is clear that
the amount of teacher
who were Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
spent
teaching Verb problem
apply
in
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at
primary
level Correct article usage
the primary
which
was the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of hours
600 in Japan
. This
number
slightly increase
in Spain and the Wrong verb form
increased
number
of hours
decreased in
580 Change preposition
to
hours
whereas
in USA
the Correct article usage
the USA
number
of each
Correct determiner usage
apply
teacher
spent teaching Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
in
Change preposition
at
primary
level which was grew Correct article usage
the primary
up
750 Change preposition
by
hours
.
Turning to the remaining four data sets, it can be seen that the lower secondary leves
which was spent teaching in Correct your spelling
level
levels
lives
Japan
in
the Change preposition
apply
number
of hours
650 while
this
value a
rose in Spain and Correct article usage
apply
then
felt
to about 600 Correct your spelling
fell
hour
in Iceland. The Change to a plural noun
hours
USA
at this
value rapidly increased by the number
of hours
1000.
Finally
, the teacher
spent teaching for uper
secondary was about the Correct your spelling
upper
super
number
of hours
700 in Japan
. This
number
gradually climbed to approximiately
1180 Correct your spelling
approximately
hours
in USA
.Correct article usage
the USA
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, teacher, japan, usa, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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