The chart below shows what Anthropologie graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years
The pie chart illustrates the situation of
graduates
from a specific university in terms of jobs, while
the table focuses on the type of their
employment and salaries after 5 years of work.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Firstly
, it can be seen that the most
proportion of Correct word choice
highest
graduates
were able to find full-time jobs after graduation with 52
% rate. Correct article usage
a 52
Moreover
, after
this
figure, the second biggest is part-time workers with 15 per cent on
total. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, 12% of graduates
were totally jobless which is a little concerning. Also
, the amount of people who started full-time postgrad studies was equal to the ones that are unknown. As for the table, freelance consultants and government sectors,
had exactly equal numbers in both Remove the comma
apply
20k-49.99k
and 50k-74.99k salary Correct article usage
the 20k-49.99k
range
with 5 and 15 per cent respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
Secondly
, the same amount of graduates
were employed in 75000$-99999$ and +100000$ salary range
by 40%. Government sectors, however
, have seen more changes in this
range
with 30% for 75k-99.99k and 50% for +100000k, which means a
better results.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
To sum up
, the amount of employees in different salary ranges in private companies varied more and most of the workers were on
Change preposition
in
50
to 75k Correct article usage
the 50
range
by 35 per cent.Submitted by Taha Sol. on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, k, range with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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