The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
percentage
of the Korean population over 4 years old who listened to the
radio
and watched
television
at different times throughout the day from October to December
in
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2005.
Overall
,it can be seen that the proportion of
television
audiences was higher than
radio
.The
radio
percentage
reached the peak in the morning
whereas
,
television
received the most viewers at night.
To begin
with,The proportion of
radio
audiences began at 10% at 6 AM and the
percentage
increased exponentially to peak at a quarter.After that hour,the audience had declined constantly to under 5%
On the other hand
,
Television
viewers started at a lower
percentage
compared to
radio
,occupying under 5%
then
the audience slightly rose to under 10% and remained constant until noon.After 12 AM the
percentage
had risen significantly to reach the highest percent at 45% at 8 AM and
then
dropped dramatically to the same level as
radio
which was under 5% after 12AM
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, radio, television with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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