The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph presents the amount of
visitors
to 6 art galleries
in 2011. It highlights data from various museums
from different countries. Furthermore
, it illustrates the number of visitors
on the y-axis in intervals of 1 million
.
Overall
, there is a decreasing trend in the number of visitors
starting from the left side of the figure with the Louvre being the most visited with just under 9 million
visitors
within the year. It has a dramatic gap compared to the following museums
.
Moreover
, the Metropolitan and British museums
levelled off in amount with having
approximately the same numbers just below 6 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
. In contrast
, the last
three museums
have a marked decrease in guests in their galleries
compared to the first three. With all three having just above or below 3 million
visiting their art galleries
.
It can be noted that galleries
from the US and Europe are more frequented by tourists compared to those in Asia.Submitted by erickacasandra.abas on
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