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The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph presents the amount of
visitors
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 to 6 art
galleries
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 in 2011. It highlights data from various
museums
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 from different countries.
Furthermore
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, it illustrates the number of
visitors
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 on the y-axis in intervals of 1
million
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.
Overall
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, there is a decreasing trend in the number of
visitors
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 starting from the left side of the figure with the Louvre being the most visited with just under 9
million
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visitors
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 within the year. It has a dramatic gap compared to the following
museums
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.
Moreover
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, the Metropolitan and British
museums
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 levelled off in amount with
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approximately the same numbers just below 6
million
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.
In contrast
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, the
last
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 three
museums
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 have a marked decrease in guests in their
galleries
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 compared to the first three. With all three having just above or below 3
million
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 visiting their art
galleries
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. It can be noted that
galleries
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 from the US and Europe are more frequented by tourists compared to those in Asia.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, galleries, museums, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • fluctuations
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • trend
  • visitor demographics
  • attendance
  • special exhibition
  • promotional campaign
  • footfall
  • gallery capacity
  • cultural attraction
  • art enthusiasts
  • exhibit
  • statistical comparison
  • tourist attraction
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