The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.
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The pie charts provide data on community
government
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spending between 2010 and 2015 .
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, at the beginning of the
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education made up
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part of the chart the
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expenditure,
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made up the biggest part of the chart the administration city.In comparison,
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of the
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education became the largest
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local
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expenditure and the lowest contribution was made by transport,culture and leisure and
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. In 2010 , education was 24% ,
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, it decreased by 21% in 2015 year. Healthcare,which comprised 21% community executive paying out in 2010 decreased slightly to 20% in 2015. In 2010, defence accounted for 17 %,
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, it experienced a negligible fall to 14 % in 2015 .At the beginning of the period, transport, which comprised 3%
local
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government
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expenditure in 2010, declined slightly to 1% in 2015 .
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, culture and leisure accounted for 2% in 2010,it witnessed a decrease to 1% in 2015. Interest on borrowing levelled
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5% in 2010,
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,it experienced a moderate
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increase two- double in 2015.
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,welfare , which comprised 8%
community
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authority spending in 2010, experienced a noticeable rise to 13% in 2015.
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, from 2010 to 2015 ,other
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pensions the
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percentage wise
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Vocabulary: Replace the words government with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • allocation
  • budget
  • fiscal
  • increased/decreased spending
  • percentage
  • funding
  • infrastructure
  • public services
  • education
  • healthcare
  • recreation
  • welfare
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policy
  • trend
  • analysis
  • comparative
  • significant
  • allocate
  • reallocate
  • subsidize
  • cutbacks
  • deficit
  • surplus
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