A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Dear
Museum
Director, I am writing in the context of applying
part-time
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voluntary
worker
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at
National
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the National
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museum
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of Art. I am a student at
University
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the University
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of British Columbia
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in
Museum
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the Museum
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of
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, waiting for my results.
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, I want to spend my quality time helping at
museum
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, which is not source of huge
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information but
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also
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people of
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interest
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together.
Thus
, making it
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best learning place for me as well.
Furthermore
, I have a lot of skills and qualities that can be important for volunteering at
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like
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patience and teamwork are two of them.
Nevertheless
, I can stay quite calm and composed
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and rush hours.
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, I can mold myself to work in
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for better outcomes and
controle
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control
. As I have already mentioned
that
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I am free after my exam
therefore
I am
avaliable
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available
throughout
week
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, even on weekends. I would love to hear back from you. Regards Sooji
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coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea to enhance readability.
task achievement
Ensure all parts of the prompt are fully addressed; more specific details about your skills or museum-related interests would strengthen the task response.
task achievement
The letter was written using a polite and appropriate tone, suited for addressing a museum director.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a logical structure with a clear beginning and ending, making it coherent and easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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