The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line chart compares data about how many spreads per gram were used between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of all items except low fat & reduced spreads were reduced over the period of 16 years.
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According to
the diagram, at the start, Butter, which hit Linking Words
the
highest point in 1981, scored 140; Change the word
its
then
it increased and peaked at 160 in 1986; Linking Words
however
, it declined significantly to 100, the same number as Margarine, in 1991; Linking Words
thereafter
, it fell moderately to roughly 50 in 2007.
The graph demonstrates that Margarine, the second factor, went down from nearly 95 in 1981 to 80 in 1986 Linking Words
thereafter
, it climbed to 100 in 1991 and its figure stabilizes until 1996; Linking Words
then
it dipped somewhat to 40 in 2007. The Linking Words
last
element that fashion began in 1996 was low fat & reduced spreads; Linking Words
additionally
, it reached almost 10 in the beginning. Later it leapt considerably to the same mark at Margerine in 2001 and touched the vertex at 80 Linking Words
finally
, it reduced to approximately 70.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "thereafter".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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