The map shows changes in the Spanish city of Castéllion in recent times.
The maps illustrate information about the alteration of Castellion, which is the
city
of Spain, since 2000 till now. Overall
, there was a remarkable development at the present compared to 2000. In addition
, it is readilly
apparent that there was only Correct your spelling
readily
an
Correct determiner usage
one
univertisty
, which remained unchanged after Correct your spelling
university
development
stage.
Add an article
the development
Initially
, the train station was demolished, which was in place of the police station. The new train station was constructed at the new location, which was on the right side of the old position. The old market also
was rebuilt at the opposite site via city
Correct article usage
the city
center
at the present. Meanwhile, it was altered by the new shop. Change the spelling
centre
Additionally
, the tree in the right top corner of city
was destroyed to build a new shopping Add an article
the city
centre
. It is worth noting that city
Correct article usage
the city
centre
was
added a new function for Unnecessary verb
apply
bike
Correct article usage
the bike
retal
scheme.
Correct your spelling
rental
retail
Secondly
, there was
lots of new Wrong verb form
are
building
in Castellion at Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
the
present. The hall of residence was built newly at the left top corner. The airport Correct article usage
apply
also
are
creating between the new shopping Change the verb form
is
centre
and the new covered market. Beside
, two buildings Replace the word
Besides
was
constructed in the south of a road that was a cinema and bars and clubs. Change the verb form
were
Finally
, a tramline was connected from the university to the city
centre
. While
,
the road was changed its purpose for pedestrians only.Remove the comma
apply
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