The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The provided table compares six metropolises' underground railways in terms of their age, length, and annual number of
passengers
.
Overall
, London has the oldest and longest
railway
system
,
while
Tokyo manages to
attarct
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attract
the highest number of commuters. With 394
kilometers
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kilometres
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in length and a total number of 775 million
passengers
, the London
railway
was the first underground
system
to be established in 1863,
while
the Paris underground
system
, built 37 years later, serves 416 million more commuters annually. The Tokyo underground
system
,
although
opened 27 years after the Paris
railway
system
and shrunk in the
lenght
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length
light
of the
railway
, surpasses both countries with 1927
passengers
choosing
this
system
for their communication. In terms of the newest
railway
stations, Washington
railway
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attracted almost double the amount of Kyoto's and Los Angeles's
passengers
, with 144 million
passengers
.
Likewise
, opened in 1976, with 126
killiometers
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kilometres
of
route
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the route
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it
also
overtakes these two countries in their age and
killometers
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kilometres
as well.
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