Task 1: The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how soft cheese is made.
Overall
, there are five steps in the process
of making soft cheese. At
the beginning, start with mixing water and milk. The following steps are cooling, fermentation, evaporation, and cooling again.
Change the preposition
In
At
the first stage, water and milk will be mixed together in the mixer,at Change preposition
In
this
process
the thickness level of the mixture is the lowest. After that, it moves to a cooling process
, at 5 degrees celsius
and will Capitalize word
Celsius
last
for 2 hours
.When the first cooling process
is finished, salt will be added before the fermentation process
, which requires 37 degrees celsius
heating for 6 Capitalize word
Celsius
hours
. After that, the evaporation will take 8 hours
and it needs 100 degrees celsius
in order to complete it, in Capitalize word
Celsius
this
process
the thickness level of the mixture is average.Finally
, the last
colling step will take another 8 hours
, at 5 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
, which will release the waste water and make the cheese become soft.It can be seen that Capitalize word
Celsius
this
process
take
20 Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
hours
in total.Submitted by midden-02.tore on
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