Task 1: The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about how soft cheese is made.

Overall

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, there are five steps in the

process

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of making soft cheese.

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the beginning, start with mixing water and milk. The following steps are cooling, fermentation, evaporation, and cooling again.

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the first stage, water and milk will be mixed together in the mixer,at

this

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process

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the thickness level of the mixture is the lowest. After that, it moves to a cooling

process

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, at 5 degrees

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celsius

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and will

last

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for 2

hours

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.When the first cooling

process

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is finished, salt will be added before the fermentation

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, which requires 37 degrees

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celsius

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heating for 6

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. After that, the evaporation will take 8

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and it needs 100 degrees

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celsius

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in order to complete it, in

this

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process

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the thickness level of the mixture is average.

Finally

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, the

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colling step will take another 8

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, at 5

degree

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celsius

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, which will release the waste water and make the cheese become soft.It can be seen that

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process

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take

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takes

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20

hours

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in total.