The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
The provided pictures illustrate a step-by-step process of making
chocolate
.
Use synonyms
To begin
, the provided illustrations show a 10-step man-made linear process, which starts with Linking Words
growing
of red pods on the cacao tree and concludes with the production of the Correct article usage
the growing
chocolate
.
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Firstly
, as it can be seen, pods on cacao trees must grow and ripe and become red. Those cacao trees usually grow in South America, African countries and Indonesia. Once pods are ripe, they are harvested and white cocoa beans are taken. Linking Words
The next step is
beans’ fermentation, which is followed by spreading them in the sun to dry for a Linking Words
while
, putting them in large sacks and delivering them by train or lorry to factories.
The next Linking Words
last
stages before Linking Words
chocolate
is made are Use synonyms
process
of beans being roasted at high temperature, Add an article
the process
a process
crushing
into small pieces with removing the outer shellWrong verb form
crushed
.
In the final stage, Add a missing verb
is.
a liquid
Remove the article
liquid chocolate
a bar of liquid chocolate
chocolate
is produced by pressing the inner part.Use synonyms
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