The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph compares the various amounts and types of fast food which Australian teenagers consumed over a
period
of 25 years.
It is evident that the Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
had risen by the end of the Use synonyms
period
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
had become the least popular fast food in 2000.
In 1975, Australian teenagers ate Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
100 Use synonyms
times
, Use synonyms
whereas
the figure for Linking Words
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
pizza
were lower at nearly 15 Use synonyms
times
and just under 10 Use synonyms
times
, respectively. Use synonyms
Consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
fell by 15 Use synonyms
times
before rising to nearly 95 in 1985. Use synonyms
By contrast
, between 1975 and 1985, the number of Linking Words
times
which Use synonyms
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
pizza
were eaten, rose rapidly to 85 and 30, respectively.
Over the next 15 years, the amount of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
consumed fell behind that of Use synonyms
hamburgers
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
hamburgers
rose to 100 Use synonyms
times
in 1995 and stayed at Use synonyms
this
level until the end of the Linking Words
period
. The Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
pizza
rose to nearly 85 in 1995 after which it remained stable until the end of the Use synonyms
period
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, consumption, pizza, hamburgers, fish, chips, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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