The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
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The graph compares the various amounts and types of fast food which Australian teenagers consumed over a
period
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of 25 years. It is evident that the
consumption
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of
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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had risen by the end of the
period
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,
while
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fish
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and
chips
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had become the least popular fast food in 2000. In 1975, Australian teenagers ate
fish
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and
chips
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100
times
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,
whereas
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the figure for
hamburgers
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and
pizza
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were lower at nearly 15
times
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and just under 10
times
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, respectively.
Consumption
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of
fish
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and
chips
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fell by 15
times
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before rising to nearly 95 in 1985.
By contrast
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, between 1975 and 1985, the number of
times
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which
hamburgers
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and
pizza
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were eaten, rose rapidly to 85 and 30, respectively. Over the next 15 years, the amount of
fish
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and
chips
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consumed fell behind that of
hamburgers
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.
However
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, the
consumption
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of
hamburgers
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rose to 100
times
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in 1995 and stayed at
this
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level until the end of the
period
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. The
consumption
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of
pizza
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rose to nearly 85 in 1995 after which it remained stable until the end of the
period
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, consumption, pizza, hamburgers, fish, chips, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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