The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph compares the various amounts and types of fast food which Australian teenagers consumed over a
period
of 25 years.
It is evident that the consumption
of pizza
and hamburgers
had risen by the end of the period
, while
fish
and chips
had become the least popular fast food in 2000.
In 1975, Australian teenagers ate fish
and chips
100 times
, whereas
the figure for hamburgers
and pizza
were lower at nearly 15 times
and just under 10 times
, respectively. Consumption
of fish
and chips
fell by 15 times
before rising to nearly 95 in 1985. By contrast
, between 1975 and 1985, the number of times
which hamburgers
and pizza
were eaten, rose rapidly to 85 and 30, respectively.
Over the next 15 years, the amount of fish
and chips
consumed fell behind that of hamburgers
. However
, the consumption
of hamburgers
rose to 100 times
in 1995 and stayed at this
level until the end of the period
. The consumption
of pizza
rose to nearly 85 in 1995 after which it remained stable until the end of the period
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, consumption, pizza, hamburgers, fish, chips, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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